Took My Father
Mum, Ive moved in! Can you believe it? Finally!
Charlotte pressed her mobile between her shoulder and ear, wrestling with a stubborn lock on the front door. The key turned with difficulty, as though testing the mettle of its new owner.
Darling, oh thank heaven! And the flat? Is everything alright? Her mothers voice trembled with excitement and worry.
Its perfect! Light and spacious. The balcony faces east, just as I wanted. Is Dad with you?
Im here, Im here! came the familiar rumble of Peters voice. Weve switched to speaker. So, little chicks flown the nest, eh?
Dad, Im twenty-five now, hardly a chick.
Youll always be a chick to me. Checked the locks, have you? No draughts from the windows? Radiators
Peter, give the girl a break, Mum cut in. Charlotte, do be careful. Its a new build, you never know who lives round about.
Charlotte laughed, finally winning her battle and pushed open the door.
Mum, its not some grimy bedsit from the seventies. Its a respectable building, decent folk. Ill be fine.
The weeks blurred together in a relentless dash between DIY stores, furniture shops, and her new flat. Charlotte fell asleep with wallpaper catalogues on her pillow and woke pondering which shade of grout would best suit the bathroom tiles.
One Saturday, standing amid her bare living room, inspecting curtain swatches, her mobile buzzed to life again.
Hows things coming along? Dad asked.
Slowly, but theyre getting there. Today Im choosing curtains. Torn between ivory and warm cream. Honestly, Dad, what do you think?
I reckon thats the same colour with a different price tag.
Dad, you havent a clue about colours.
But I do know electrics. Are the sockets wired right?
The renovations ate up time, money, and patience, but every new touch transformed the empty walls into a real home. Charlotte picked soft beige wallpaper for the bedroom herself, found the flooring handyman, and arranged the furniture to make her tiny kitchen feel bigger.
When the last builder hauled away the remnants of plaster and paint tins, Charlotte sat on the freshly cleaned living room floor. Golden light filtered through her new curtains and there was a scent of paint and something fresherthat first true feeling of having her own home.
It was three days after her final move when she met her neighbour. She was fiddling with her keys when the opposite door clicked open.
Ooh, the new girl! A woman, barely into her thirties, short hair, bright lipstick, curious eyes. Im Sophie. Im just across the halllooks like were neighbours.
Charlotte. Pleased to meet you.
If you ever need a pinch of salt, a cup of sugar, or just a chat, pop over. Its odd alone in a new place at first, believe me.
Sophie proved an amiable companion. Over tea in Charlottes kitchen they swapped stories about hapless property managers and quirks of their floor layout. Sophie shared everything: who offered the best internet, which tradesman could fix a leaky tap without daylight robbery, and where to buy the freshest bread nearby.
Listen, Ive got this apple cake recipeabsolute magic! Sophie scrolled through her phone. Ill send it over. Thirty minutes in the oven and people think youre Mary Berry herself.
Oh, brilliant! I havent even christened the oven yet.
Days folded into weeks, and Charlotte often felt grateful for Sophies easy warmth. Theyd pass in the stairwell, drop in for coffee, swap paperbacks.
On Saturday, Peter came roundhelp with a shelf that refused to stay up.
Youve bought the wrong wall plugs, Dad grumbled, squinting at the bracket. These are for plasterboard and youve got brick. Hold on, Ive got proper ones in the car.
In an hour, the shelf was upfirm and straight. Peter packed away tools, surveyed his handiwork, and nodded.
Thatll last twenty years.
Dad, youre the best, Charlotte laughed, hugging him.
They walked downstairs, talking about work and this and that. Peter poked fun at her new boss who couldnt keep track of deadlines or paperwork.
At the front entrance, Sophie appeared, bags from Sainsburys swinging at her side.
Hiya! Charlotte waved. Dad, meet Sophie, my neighbour Ive been telling you about.
Pleasure, Peter smiled, warm as ever.
Sophie pausedjust the briefest flickeras she looked from Peter to Charlotte. Her smile stiffened, almost pasted on.
Likewise, Sophie said, vanishing inside without another word.
After that, everything changed. The next morning, Charlotte bumped into Sophie in the hall; she greeted her, as usual, but received only a frosty nod. A few days later she invited Sophie for tea but was rebuffed with curt excuses.
Then came the complaints.
The first was a tap on the door at nine in the evening.
Weve had reports about noise, the community PC looked sheepish. Loud music, disturbances.
Music? I was reading!
Still, neighbours…
Complaints poured inletters to the management company about unbearable stomping, constant banging, and music in the night. The PC became a regular visitor, always apologetic.
Charlotte knew where it was coming from but couldnt fathom why.
Every morning became a gamblewhat next? Eggshell smeared across her door? Coffee grounds stuffed into the gap beneath? A bag of potato peelings tucked under her mat?
Charlotte set her alarm thirty minutes earlier, scrubbing away the mess before work. Her hands stung with cleaning fluid and her throat felt tight all the time.
This cant go on, she muttered one evening, scrolling for spyholes online.
It took twenty minutes to installa little camera inside a normal-looking peephole. Charlotte synced it with her phone and waited.
She didnt have long to wait.
At three a.m. her phone buzzed; movement detected. Disbelievingly, Charlotte watched as Sophiehair in curlers, dressing gown, slippersmethodically smeared something dark over the door. Careful, almost routine.
The next night Charlotte waited by the entrance, straining for every sound. Near half past two, there was a shuffle outside.
She flung open the door.
Sophie froze, plastic bag in hand, something unpleasant sloshing inside.
What have I done to you? Charlotte was surprised at the sadness in her own voice. Why are you doing this?
Slowly, Sophie dropped the bag. Her face twisted, pretty features blurred into a mask of old bitterness.
You? You havent done anything. But your father
Whats Dad got to do with this?
Hes my father too! Sophie almost shouted, not caring who overheard. But youhe raised you, spoiled you, loved you. Me? He abandoned me when I was three! Not a penny, not one phone call! Mum and I barely scraped by while he made a happy family with your precious mother! So yes, you stole my father!
Charlotte shrank back, her spine pressed to the door frame.
Youre lying
Am I? Ask him! Ask Peter if he remembers Marion Davies and her daughter Sophie, the ones he tossed out like rubbish!
Charlotte slammed the door and slid down to the floor, mind whirling: its not trueit cant be true. Dad would never. Never.
The next morning she drove to her parents house. All the way, rehearsing what to say, yet when she saw her fatheras calm as ever, newspaper in handher words died in her throat.
Char! What a surprise! Peter stood, smiling. Mums popped to the shops, shell be back soon.
Dad, I need to ask Charlotte perched on the sofa, fingers clawing at her handbag strap. Do you know a woman called Marion Davies?
Peter froze. The newspaper slipped from his hands and slid quietly to the carpet.
How do you
Her daughter is my neighbour. The one I introduced to you. She says youre her father.
The silence seemed endless.
Come on, Peter said abruptly. Well go to her. Right now. I have to set this straight.
The drive to the block took forty minutes. They didnt speak. Charlotte watched the houses and hedgerows rush by, trying to make sense of everything.
Sophie opened her door immediately, as if waiting. She eyed them both, hard, but stepped aside in silence.
Come for confession, have you? she spat at Peter. Thirty years too late?
Ive come to explain. Peter reached into his jackets inside pocket, pulling out a folded piece of paper. Read this.
Sophie took it warily. As she skimmed the page, her expression shiftedanger gave way to confusion, then to dismay.
What is this?
A DNA test result, Peter answered quietly. I took it when your mother tried to sue for support. It proved Im not your father. Marion was unfaithful. Youre not my child.
The paper slipped from Sophies numb fingers.
Charlotte and her father left without another word. Safely at home, Charlotte walked over and hugged him tightly, pressing her face into his worn jacket.
Im sorry, Dad. Sorry I doubted you, even for a moment.
Peter stroked her hair, just as he had when she was little and ran to him, upset after quarrels with friends.
Theres nothing to forgive, love. Some wounds are made by others.
Charlotte never repaired things with Sophie after that. She no longer wished to. The streak of spite had severed any hope of respect for the woman next doorand some wounds, it seemed, could never heal.












