Let Me Remind You “Miss Mary, I just can’t get this swirl right,” sighed little Tommy, a Year 2 pupil, sadly poking his paintbrush at the stubborn, curling-the-wrong-way green leaf on the flower he’d drawn. “Not so hard, love, be gentle with your brush – like you’re stroking a feather across your palm. There, that’s it! Beautiful! That’s not a swirl, it’s a masterpiece!” smiled the elderly teacher. “And who’s the lucky one getting your lovely picture?” “It’s for Mum!” Tommy replied, grinning now that he’d tamed the awkward leaf. “It’s her birthday today! This is my present!” His pride at the teacher’s praise was clear in his voice. “Oh, your mum is a lucky woman, Tom. Don’t close your sketchbook just yet. Let the paints dry a little or they’ll smudge. Then, when you get home, you can carefully tear the page out. Trust me, your mum will love it!” The teacher glanced one last time at the boy’s tousled head bent over the paper, then returned to her desk, smiling at her thoughts. What a gift for his mum! Bet it’s been years since she’s had something so lovely. Tommy’s got real talent for art—maybe I should call his mum about art school. Talent shouldn’t go to waste. And while I’m at it, I’ll ask my former pupil if she liked the present. I can’t take my eyes off those flowers Tommy painted; they look ready to rustle their living green curls. Oh, he takes after his mum! No doubt about it. Lorna was a brilliant young artist herself at his age… ***** “Miss Mary, it’s Lorna—Tommy Cottam’s mum,” came the strict voice of a young woman over the phone that evening. “Just letting you know, Tom won’t be in tomorrow.” “Hello, Lorna! Is everything alright?” “No, it isn’t! That little rascal ruined my whole birthday! And now he’s in bed with a fever—the ambulance only just left.” “Hang on, Lorna, what do you mean fever? He left school happy, bringing you his—” “You mean those splotches?” “Splotches? No, Lorna! He painted you such beautiful flowers! I was just about to call to suggest art school for him…” “I don’t know about flowers, but I certainly wasn’t expecting a soggy mess for a gift!” “Soggy mess? What on earth happened?” Miss Mary was lost for words as Lorna rambled on, tense and upset, and her frown deepened with every explanation: how Tom came home late, drenched in mud and water… How he pulled a soaking-wet puppy from under his coat—the stench! He’d climbed into a thawing puddle to rescue it after bigger boys threw it in. Ruined books, splotched sketchbook, and a fever nearly touching 39… The party ruined, guests left before the cake came out. The doctor scolded her for not watching her child… “After Tom fell asleep, I took that puppy straight back to the dump. The sketchbook’s drying on the radiator, but the water’s made a mess of everything, not just the flowers!” Lorna grumbled. She didn’t seem to notice how the elderly teacher’s expression grew grimmer with every word, especially when she heard what happened to the rescued puppy. Miss Mary looked sternly at Lorna, stroked the ruined sketchbook gently, and spoke softly… About green swirls and living flowers. About the care of a child and his brave heart, unwilling to look away from injustice. Of the bullies who threw the little animal into that pit. Then she stood, took Lorna by the hand, and led her to the window. “There’s that pit,” she pointed. “Tom could have drowned, not just the puppy. Do you think he gave that a thought while he was rescuing it? Or was he thinking about those flowers on the page and trying not to breathe on them, so he wouldn’t spoil his gift?” “Or have you forgotten, Lorna, how—you in the nineties—sobbed bitterly on the school bench, hugging a stray kitten you’d rescued from the local boys?” “How we all stroked it, waiting for your mum? How you didn’t want to go home when your parents tossed your ‘scruffy flea bag’ out… Luckily, they changed their mind in time.” “Well, let me remind you! And your cat, Tigger, you never wanted to part with! And floppy-eared Max, that puppy who went everywhere with you right up to uni, and the rook with the broken wing you took care of at school…” Miss Mary fetched an old photo from her album: a tiny girl in a white pinafore holding a furry kitten, smiling at her classmates. Her voice was gentle, but firm: “I’ll remind you of the kindness in your heart, the kindness that bloomed in spite of everything, bright as paint on a child’s page.” A faded drawing tumbled out after the photo: a girl, clutching a fluffy kitten and gripping her mum’s hand. “If it were up to me,” Miss Mary added more sternly, “I’d have kissed that puppy and Tom together! And put those splotches in a frame! There’s no better gift for a mother than raising her child to be a good person!” Lorna didn’t seem to notice how her face changed with every word. She cast worried glances at Tom’s bedroom door, clutching the ill-fated sketchbook with whitening fingers. “Miss Mary! Please, would you watch Tom for a few minutes? I’ll be right back, I promise!” Under her teacher’s gentle gaze, Lorna threw on her coat and rushed out. She ran straight for the distant dump, not caring that her feet got soaked, calling and searching under boxes and bags, glancing anxiously homeward… Would she be forgiven? ***** “Tom, who’s got their nose buried in the flowers? Is that your mate, Duke?” “That’s him, Miss Mary! Looks like him, doesn’t it?” “It certainly does! There’s that white star on his paw—how I remember washing those muddy paws with your mum.” The teacher chuckled fondly. “And now I wash them every day! Mum says, ‘If you have a friend, you take care of him!’ She even bought a special doggy tub for it!” Tom said proudly. “You’ve got a wonderful mum,” nodded Miss Mary. “Are you drawing her another picture, then?” “Yep! This one’s for a frame. The splotches are up on the wall now, and she always smiles at them. Why would you smile at splotches, Miss Mary?” “At splotches? Maybe you would, if they came straight from the heart. Tell me, how’s art school?” “It’s brilliant! Soon I’ll be able to paint Mum’s portrait—she’ll love it! But for now—look, I’ve got something for you, from Mum. She draws too.” Tom pulled a folded sheet of paper from his bag, and Miss Mary squeezed his shoulder lightly. On the paper, a brightly painted Tom beamed, his hand resting on Duke’s head, the dog gazing at him adoringly. Next to them, a tiny, fair-haired girl in an old-fashioned school dress hugged a fluffy kitten… To the left, behind a teacher’s desk piled with books, sat Miss Mary herself, smiling with bottomless, wise kindness in her lively gaze at her happy students. In every brushstroke, in every mark, she could feel the proud love of a mother. Miss Mary brushed away her tears and, suddenly beaming, noticed—right in the corner, drawn in flowers and curling green spirals—one single word: “Remember.”

ILL REMIND YOU

Miss Maple, the curls not working here, whispered the forlorn second-former, Tom, jabbing his paintbrush at a disobedient, oddly curving green petal on the flower hed just painted.

Dont squash the brush, lovegently, thats it glide it as though youre stroking a feather along your palm. See? Well done! Thats not a curl, thats a masterpiece! smiled the elderly teacher. Whos the lucky recipient of this masterpiece then?

Its for my mum! Tom beamed, positively glowing with pride now that the truculent leaf had surrendered. Its her birthday today! This is my present! His voice became noticeably richer after such lavish teacherly praise.

Isnt your mum lucky, Tom? Hold on, dont close your sketchbook just yet. Let the paint dry so it doesnt smudge. When you get home, you can carefully tear out the sheet and present it. Youll seeshell absolutely love it!

Miss Maple cast a last fond glance at Toms dark head bent intently over his page, then, smiling to herself, returned to her desk.

Gracious, a present for Mum! She hasnt received such lovely gifts in ages. Tom clearly has a talent for painting. I really must ring his mum and suggest she pop him down for art school. Would be criminal to waste such a gift.

And Ill have to ask my former pupil whether she liked her present. Miss Maple herself could barely tear her gaze away from the vibrant, animated petals Tom had conjured up with his brushshe half expected them to rustle to life right there.

Definitely takes after his mum, she mused. Laura was ever so good at drawing at his age too…

*****

Miss Maple? Its Laura, Tom Cottons mum, came the evening call in the teachers flat, the voice of a young woman crisply efficient. Just wanted to let you knowTom wont be coming in tomorrow.

Hello Laura! Is something the matter? Miss Maple queried, all concern.

Oh, plenty, Lauras voice snapped. Hes ruined my whole birthday, the little horror! And now hes come down with a feverambulance just left.

How on earth? He left school right as rain, bringing you his present…

What, that mess of ink-blots?

Ink-blots? Laura, really! He painted you such beautiful flowers! I was just about to call you about signing him up for art school

No clue what flowers youre on about, but I certainly wasnt expecting a bedraggled, flea-bitten lump!

A lump? What are you talking about? Miss Maple was flummoxed, her brow creasing as she tried to follow Lauras rattling explanation. Look, Laura, would you mind if I pop over? Im just round the corner, wont be long

Five minutes later, having obtained her former pupils consent (how time does fly!), Miss Maple slipped out, a battered album of faded school photographs and crumpled childhood sketches under her arm.

Laura ushered her into the bright but dishevelled kitchen, where the evidence of a foiled birthday party lingeredcake half-eaten, dirty plates piling up in the sink. She launched into her list of grievances: How Tom had arrived late from school, coat and trousers caked in filth, dripping everywhere…

How hed pulledof all thingsa sopping wet puppy from under his jumper, reeking to high heaven. Hed apparently gone chasing it into a ditch full of half-melted rubbishwhere some older boys had tossed it! His ruined books. The so-called art in his sketchbook, now just a chaotic mess of stains. His temperature, climbing to nearly forty.

The guests packed up before the cake was even sliced, the paramedic gave her a stern talking-to about not looking after her son, and

So I carted the puppy straight back to the tip once Tom fell asleep. The sketchbooks by the radiatortheres not a flower left in it, not after that dunking! Laura sniffed, utterly disgruntled.

All the while, Laura missed how Miss Maples expression grew steadily darker. When she learned the fate of the puppythe one Tom had rescuedMiss Maple looked positively thunderous.

She gently ran her hand over Toms soggy, abandoned sketchbook as she spoke, voice soft but firm

She talked about the green swirls and the flowers breathing life on paperabout childish diligence and the courage that blinds prudence. About a boys heart that refused to stand idly by while bullies tormented a helpless animal.

Then, rising, she led Laura to the window. Theres the ditch, she pointed out. Not just the puppy, Tom could have drowned in there. But do you suppose he even thought about that? Maybe he was too busy thinking about keeping those flowers on the page safe, so as not to ruin his gift.

And have you forgotten, Miss Maple said, looking sharply at Laura, how you wept near this very school playground back in the nineties, cradling that scraggly kitten youd snatched from the older boys? How the whole class fussed over it while we awaited your mum? How gutted you were when your parents booted that flea-bitten lump outthough at least they came to their senses in time!

Let me remind you then, she pressed on, pulling out from the yellowed album a large photo: a fragile, grinning girl in a white pinafore, cuddling a fluffy kitten. Let me remind you of the kindness that blossomed bold and bright in your heart, come what may.

Next fell out a faded drawinga little girl, one arm around a shaggy puppy, clutching tightly her mothers hand with the other.

If I had my way, Miss Maples tone became brisk, Id have kissed that puppy and Tom both! And framed those colourful splodgesbecause theres no better gift for a mum than bringing up a child whos a decent human being!

Lauras face shifted through a whole colour chart as Miss Maple spoke. She glanced anxiously at Toms bedroom, fingers whitened clutching the battered sketchbook.

Miss Maple! Dear, would you watch Tom for a few minutes? Just for a little while! I wont be long, promise!

Under her teachers knowing gaze, Laura scrambled into her coat and dashed out.

Not sparing a second for wet feet or chilly winds, she ran all the way down to the tip at the edge of the estate, calling out, peering under soggy boxes, rummaging through rubbish bagsconstantly glancing back towards home. Would he forgive her?

*****

Tom, whos that with his nose in those flowers? Is that your mate, Duke?

Thats him, Miss Maple! Does he look the same?

As ever! Look at that white star on his pawreminds me of scrubbing those paws with your mum! Miss Maple chuckled.

I wash his paws every day now! Tom announced with pride. Mum says if you get a mate, youve got to look after him! She even bought us a special bowl for the job.

Youve got a good mum, smiled Miss Maple. Are you drawing a present for her again?

Yep! Going to put it in a frame. Shes got those splodges hanging on the wall in a frame, you know, and she always smiles at them. I dont get why anyone would smile at splodges, Miss Maple

Splodges, you say? the teacher raised an eyebrow. Well, perhaps you wouldif those splodges came from the heart. Tell me, hows art school going? Are you managing?

You bet! Ill be painting Mums portrait soon! Shell be so happy! Andlook Tom rummaged in his rucksack, pulling out a folded paper, this is from Mum. She draws too, you know.

Miss Maple unfolded the sheet and gently squeezed Toms shoulder.

There, in a burst of colourful paint, shone a beaming Tom, hand on Dukes head as the mongrel gazed up in adoration. On one side stood a tiny, fair-haired girl in an old-fashioned school uniform, clutching a fluffy kitten. On the other, behind a staffroom desk stacked with books, Miss Maple smiled out, her eyes twinkling.

And in every brushstroke, Miss Maple felt the secret, boundless pride of a mother.

She wiped away a quiet tear and, suddenly bright, she noticed in one corner, curling among flowers and delicate green swirls, a single, cherished word: Remember….Always.

Miss Maple drew in a deep, trembling breath. For a moment, she simply sat there with Tom at her side, watching Duke out in the garden chase shadows to the fence and back. She gave Toms hand a gentle squeeze.

Isnt it funny, she whispered, how sometimes, the gifts we treasure most start as splodges, or scraggy pups, or distant memories. But they grow, and so do we. Thats the magic, Tom.

Tom grinned, eyes alight. Well remember, Miss Maple, he promised. Mum says it every night nowthank you for reminding us.

In the golden hush of afternoon, Miss Maple closed her eyes and listened: the laughter through the open window, Dukes happy bark, the proud thump as Laura pinned another homemade masterpiece to the crowded wall. She smileda smile that misted her glasses and made her heart feel wonderfully light.

And so, in that sunlit kitchen among muddy paw prints, riotous art, and the warmth of second chances, three generations found themselves painting a new and lasting memoryone that would never wash away.

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Let Me Remind You “Miss Mary, I just can’t get this swirl right,” sighed little Tommy, a Year 2 pupil, sadly poking his paintbrush at the stubborn, curling-the-wrong-way green leaf on the flower he’d drawn. “Not so hard, love, be gentle with your brush – like you’re stroking a feather across your palm. There, that’s it! Beautiful! That’s not a swirl, it’s a masterpiece!” smiled the elderly teacher. “And who’s the lucky one getting your lovely picture?” “It’s for Mum!” Tommy replied, grinning now that he’d tamed the awkward leaf. “It’s her birthday today! This is my present!” His pride at the teacher’s praise was clear in his voice. “Oh, your mum is a lucky woman, Tom. Don’t close your sketchbook just yet. Let the paints dry a little or they’ll smudge. Then, when you get home, you can carefully tear the page out. Trust me, your mum will love it!” The teacher glanced one last time at the boy’s tousled head bent over the paper, then returned to her desk, smiling at her thoughts. What a gift for his mum! Bet it’s been years since she’s had something so lovely. Tommy’s got real talent for art—maybe I should call his mum about art school. Talent shouldn’t go to waste. And while I’m at it, I’ll ask my former pupil if she liked the present. I can’t take my eyes off those flowers Tommy painted; they look ready to rustle their living green curls. Oh, he takes after his mum! No doubt about it. Lorna was a brilliant young artist herself at his age… ***** “Miss Mary, it’s Lorna—Tommy Cottam’s mum,” came the strict voice of a young woman over the phone that evening. “Just letting you know, Tom won’t be in tomorrow.” “Hello, Lorna! Is everything alright?” “No, it isn’t! That little rascal ruined my whole birthday! And now he’s in bed with a fever—the ambulance only just left.” “Hang on, Lorna, what do you mean fever? He left school happy, bringing you his—” “You mean those splotches?” “Splotches? No, Lorna! He painted you such beautiful flowers! I was just about to call to suggest art school for him…” “I don’t know about flowers, but I certainly wasn’t expecting a soggy mess for a gift!” “Soggy mess? What on earth happened?” Miss Mary was lost for words as Lorna rambled on, tense and upset, and her frown deepened with every explanation: how Tom came home late, drenched in mud and water… How he pulled a soaking-wet puppy from under his coat—the stench! He’d climbed into a thawing puddle to rescue it after bigger boys threw it in. Ruined books, splotched sketchbook, and a fever nearly touching 39… The party ruined, guests left before the cake came out. The doctor scolded her for not watching her child… “After Tom fell asleep, I took that puppy straight back to the dump. The sketchbook’s drying on the radiator, but the water’s made a mess of everything, not just the flowers!” Lorna grumbled. She didn’t seem to notice how the elderly teacher’s expression grew grimmer with every word, especially when she heard what happened to the rescued puppy. Miss Mary looked sternly at Lorna, stroked the ruined sketchbook gently, and spoke softly… About green swirls and living flowers. About the care of a child and his brave heart, unwilling to look away from injustice. Of the bullies who threw the little animal into that pit. Then she stood, took Lorna by the hand, and led her to the window. “There’s that pit,” she pointed. “Tom could have drowned, not just the puppy. Do you think he gave that a thought while he was rescuing it? Or was he thinking about those flowers on the page and trying not to breathe on them, so he wouldn’t spoil his gift?” “Or have you forgotten, Lorna, how—you in the nineties—sobbed bitterly on the school bench, hugging a stray kitten you’d rescued from the local boys?” “How we all stroked it, waiting for your mum? How you didn’t want to go home when your parents tossed your ‘scruffy flea bag’ out… Luckily, they changed their mind in time.” “Well, let me remind you! And your cat, Tigger, you never wanted to part with! And floppy-eared Max, that puppy who went everywhere with you right up to uni, and the rook with the broken wing you took care of at school…” Miss Mary fetched an old photo from her album: a tiny girl in a white pinafore holding a furry kitten, smiling at her classmates. Her voice was gentle, but firm: “I’ll remind you of the kindness in your heart, the kindness that bloomed in spite of everything, bright as paint on a child’s page.” A faded drawing tumbled out after the photo: a girl, clutching a fluffy kitten and gripping her mum’s hand. “If it were up to me,” Miss Mary added more sternly, “I’d have kissed that puppy and Tom together! And put those splotches in a frame! There’s no better gift for a mother than raising her child to be a good person!” Lorna didn’t seem to notice how her face changed with every word. She cast worried glances at Tom’s bedroom door, clutching the ill-fated sketchbook with whitening fingers. “Miss Mary! Please, would you watch Tom for a few minutes? I’ll be right back, I promise!” Under her teacher’s gentle gaze, Lorna threw on her coat and rushed out. She ran straight for the distant dump, not caring that her feet got soaked, calling and searching under boxes and bags, glancing anxiously homeward… Would she be forgiven? ***** “Tom, who’s got their nose buried in the flowers? Is that your mate, Duke?” “That’s him, Miss Mary! Looks like him, doesn’t it?” “It certainly does! There’s that white star on his paw—how I remember washing those muddy paws with your mum.” The teacher chuckled fondly. “And now I wash them every day! Mum says, ‘If you have a friend, you take care of him!’ She even bought a special doggy tub for it!” Tom said proudly. “You’ve got a wonderful mum,” nodded Miss Mary. “Are you drawing her another picture, then?” “Yep! This one’s for a frame. The splotches are up on the wall now, and she always smiles at them. Why would you smile at splotches, Miss Mary?” “At splotches? Maybe you would, if they came straight from the heart. Tell me, how’s art school?” “It’s brilliant! Soon I’ll be able to paint Mum’s portrait—she’ll love it! But for now—look, I’ve got something for you, from Mum. She draws too.” Tom pulled a folded sheet of paper from his bag, and Miss Mary squeezed his shoulder lightly. On the paper, a brightly painted Tom beamed, his hand resting on Duke’s head, the dog gazing at him adoringly. Next to them, a tiny, fair-haired girl in an old-fashioned school dress hugged a fluffy kitten… To the left, behind a teacher’s desk piled with books, sat Miss Mary herself, smiling with bottomless, wise kindness in her lively gaze at her happy students. In every brushstroke, in every mark, she could feel the proud love of a mother. Miss Mary brushed away her tears and, suddenly beaming, noticed—right in the corner, drawn in flowers and curling green spirals—one single word: “Remember.”