Country Retreat A Daughter Reclaims Her Own
Lucy, try to see sense, the situation is desperate, Bernard Thomas rubbed his forehead and sighed heavily. Elaines been nagging me for two months now.
She found some swanky study programme in Cyprus for Simon, you know, our boy.
She says he needs a leg up, to brush up his English. But where am I meant to get the money for that?
You know Im not exactly in gainful employment these days.
Lucy looked up slowly at her father.
And so youve decided selling the cottage is the answer? she asked quietly.
What else is there? her father brightened up, leaning forward. The cottage just sits there. Elaine never sets foot in the place; she says its boring, the midges
She doesnt even know its not technically mine anymore. She still thinks well stick it on the market, rake in a fortune, and life will be sorted.
Lucy, youre a clever lass. Heres the plan: you officially sell it now. Take your portion every penny you lent me ten years back!
Whatever it fetches above that at todays prices pass that on to me. After all, were family.
Its hardly a loss for you, is it? You get your money back, and youre helping your dad.
Hed turned up unexpected, of course. They hadnt kept in regular touch for years not since hed started a second family, gone on with his own life, and Lucy had hardly had much of a part in it.
Lucy had a hunch this wasnt going to be a pleasant visit. Shed half expected him to ask for money again, but The proposal was odd, to say the least.
Dad, lets think back to what happened ten years ago, Lucy said after listening to him. When you came to me, saying you needed money for that surgery and your recovery.
Do you remember?
Bernard Thomas grimaced.
Theres no need to dredge all that up, is there? I got better in the end, thank goodness.
The past, you say? Lucy gave a hollow laugh and shook her head. Id spent five years scraping together every pound, every penny I could, saving for a deposit on a flat.
I took weekend shifts, skipped holidays, pinched and scraped on everything. And then you showed up. No job, no savings but a second wife, Elaine, and your son Simon.
You took everything Id saved.
I was desperate, Lucy! What else could I do? Just lay down and give up?
I offered you help, she pressed on, ignoring him. But I told you the honest truth: I was terrified Id be left with nothing if something happened to you.
Youve got your legal heir, Elaine. She wouldnt have let me near that cottage.
We went back and forth for a week. You didnt want to write a receipt, took offence.
You dont trust your own father! you said.
But all I wanted was a bit of reassurance.
I gave you reassurance, didnt I? Bernard interrupted. We drew up the paperwork, transferred the cottage into your name.
I sold it to you for peanuts, just enough to cover my treatment.
But remember, the deal was: Id still use it, and as soon as I could, Id buy it back.
Ten years have passed, Lucy said flatly. Ten years, Dad. Did you ever mention buying it back? Not a word, not a penny.
You spent every summer out there, growing your tomatoes, burning through the firewood which I paid for.
The council tax and repairs all on me. The roof, three years ago on me.
You lived out there like king of the castle, while I struggled to pay the mortgage on my flat.
Bernard dabbed his brow with a handkerchief.
I wasnt working, Lucy You know, it took ages to bounce back after the chemo, and then at my age, nobody wants to take you on.
Elaine shes got delicate sensibilities, you know. Office life wears her down.
We get by selling a few things online, but it barely covers the basics.
Delicate sensibilities? Lucy stood and paced the kitchen. What am I then, tough as old boots?
I can work two jobs to pay off my mortgage and foot the bill for your little retreat, but thats fine
And now Elaine reckons its time to sell up, so her darling Simon can jet off to Cyprus?
My cottage, Dad. Mine.
Lucy, alright, technically its yours. But you have to see, it was only ever meant as a stop-gap.
Im your father! I gave you life! Surely youre not going to squabble over a bit of land when your brothers future is at stake?
Brother? Lucy stopped cold. Ive met my brother twice. Hes never so much as sent a text on my birthday. And as for Elaine Has she ever once asked how Im getting by? How I’ve managed these years?
She still thinks youre lord of the manor, that you just fell on hard times for a bit.
Youve lied to her for ten years, Dad.
Bernard stared at his shoes.
I meant well I just didnt want to upset her.
Shed go spare if she found Id moved property out of the family.
Out of the family?
Now, dont nitpick, Lucy! he raised his voice. This is a sound offer! The cottage is worth five times what I sold it for. The markets gone mad.
You take back your hundred thousand you lent me. All fair, isnt it? The other two hundred thousand I need it.
Simons schooling, Elaines dental work, a new car the old things falling apart.
Its not as if the extra money will change much for you youve got your London flat.
Help the family!
Lucy hardly recognised him now. Where was the dad who used to tuck her in and read to her at night?
No, she said sharply.
What do you mean, no? her father stopped, mouth open.
Im not selling the cottage. And Im not handing anything extra over to you.
Its my cottage by right and by law.
Youve had ten years living there rent-free, getting your strength back, enjoying the countryside. Consider that my maintenance for you.
Thats the end of it.
Are you serious? Bernard began to turn red. Youd take the last thing from your own father?
If it wasnt for me, that cottage wouldnt exist! My dad built it!
Exactly, Granddad. And hed be turning in his grave if he could see you flogging off the family home to pay for dodgy courses in Cyprus, for a nineteen-year-old whos never lifted a finger.
Lucy, come to your senses! her father shouted, jumping up. You owe me! I raised you! If you dont agree, Ill go public everyone will know how tight-fisted you are.
Ill tell Elaine everything; shell kick up such a stink youll regret it!
Well go to court! Well have the sale declared void! You took advantage of my illness!
Lucy gave a sad little laugh.
Go ahead, Dad. Ive kept every invoice from the hospital. All the bank transfers.
And the sales contract which you signed in full health, in front of a solicitor, once you were in remission.
And Elaine will be in for a shock when she learns you sold that cottage before Simon even started school.
You told her it was still your inheritance?
Lucy his voice suddenly became smaller, almost pleading. Please, sweetheart. Elaines having a bad time If she finds out the truth, shell ditch me. Shes fifteen years younger, you know shes only stayed with me because of the security. If theres no cottage, no money, shell leave. Is that what you want, your old dad on the streets?
Did you ever think about that before? Lucy felt her anger coil inside her. When you were jobless for years? When you let Elaine run up debts? When you promised her the world on my tab?
So you wont help? Bernard straightened up. Some daughter you are. Raised you, and for what
Go home, Dad. Tell Elaine the truth. Its the only way youll keep a shred of dignity.
Choke on the cottage for all I care! he spat as he stalked past her. And dont you dare call me your father, do you hear? Forget my number!
He stormed out, and Lucy let herself laugh as if shed ever really had a dad.
Hed left when she was seven, after all.
***
The phone rang Saturday morning, an unfamiliar number flashing up.
Hello?
Is that Lucy? she recognised her stepmother, Elaine, at once. Who do you think you are, you little madam?
Think we dont know how you tricked Bernard? Hes told me everything!
Shoved papers under his nose when hed barely come round from anaesthetic!
Good morning, Elaine, Lucy replied, calmly. If you want to talk, try it without shouting.
Morning? Hah! Let me tell you, we’re already getting the legal paperwork ready!
My solicitor says this kind of deal wont stand you took advantage of your fathers illness, you stole a family home for peanuts.
Well leave you with nothing!
Elaine, please listen calmly.
I understand youve had Bernards version of all this. But I have proof that the money went on his hospital bills.
Ive also got copies of all his messages from the last ten years thanking me for paying the cottage expenses and letting him stay there.
He wrote Thank you, darling, for not giving up on me and keeping the cottage safe.
How do you think the judge will see things?
A stunned silence on the other end Elaine wasnt expecting that.
You little she hissed. Isnt your London flat enough? You have to take the last thing from your brother? Simon needs his education!
Simon needs to get a job, Lucy replied firmly. The same way I did at his age.
And maybe, Elaine, you ought to hear the truth. Remember his shares? Thats what he told you, wasnt it?
What shares? Elaines voice faltered.
The non-existent ones. He was taking the money I sent out of kindness, spinning you a tale about dividends.
Ask to see his statements if you dont believe me. He lied. He begged me for that money for years.
While I got into debt, thinking I was saving my dads life. I only found all this out recently myself.
Elaine hung up. That evening, a message arrived from her father: three words only You ruined everything.
***
She didnt reply. A few days later, Lucy heard from neighbours at the cottage that Elaine had thrown an almighty scene.
She screamed at Bernard and tossed his things out of the window until the police showed up.
It turned out Elaine, confident shed soon have the cottage money, had already taken out a massive, high-interest loan for Simons start in life.
Bernard had to flee. Elaine, having discovered the full extent of his lies, filed for divorce.
Simon, used to the easy life, showed no sympathy for his dad and soon moved in with his girlfriend, declaring, Its his own fault.
Lucy doesnt know where her father is now. She doesnt intend to find out.
What Ive learned from all of this is simple: sometimes, being family means nothing if respect, trust and honesty have been lost. In the end, I reclaimed not just my cottage, but my independence from old guilt. And Ive finally learnt you cant buy family, but you can draw your own boundaries.











