Raw and Real… In This Family, Everyone Lived Their Own Separate Life Dad, Alex, had more than just a wife — he often had another woman by his side, sometimes more than one. Mum, Jenny, suspected her husband’s affairs but wasn’t exactly a saint herself; she enjoyed spending time with a married colleague outside the home. The two sons were left to fend for themselves, neglected and often wandering about with nothing to do. Their mother insisted that it was entirely the school’s job to raise her kids. The only time the whole family gathered was on Sundays, quickly and silently munching lunch in the kitchen before rushing off in all directions. They might have spent the rest of their days in their broken, sinful, but oddly sweet world, if not for the tragedy that changed everything… When the younger son, Danny, turned twelve, Dad Alex took him to the garage as his helper for the first time. While Danny was exploring the tools, Alex popped out to chat with some car-enthusiast mates working nearby on their motors. Suddenly, thick black smoke billowed from Alex’s garage, followed by flames. No one knew what had happened. (It would later come out that Danny accidentally knocked a lit blowtorch onto a can of petrol.) People froze, panicked. Fire raged. Water was thrown over Alex, who rushed into the inferno. Seconds later, he emerged carrying his lifeless son. Danny was burned all over, save for his face — protected by his hands. His clothes had been reduced to ashes. Firefighters and an ambulance arrived. Danny was alive but barely. Surgeons worked desperately, while his parents waited in agony. A doctor emerged at last: “We’re doing all we can. Your son is in a coma. His chances are one in a million. Medicine can do no more. If Danny fights with everything he’s got, maybe a miracle will happen. Be strong.” Without thinking, Alex and Jenny dashed to the nearest church, drenched by a wild downpour, desperate to save their boy. For the first time in their lives, they entered the sanctuary. There, in the hushed gloom, they found Father Simon. “Our son’s dying! Please, what should we do?” Jenny sobbed. “Ah, so in need you come to God? Are you very sinful?” the priest asked bluntly. “Don’t think so. Never killed anyone,” Alex muttered, avoiding Father Simon’s piercing eyes. “But you killed your love for each other — it lies dead at your feet. Between loving husband and wife, not even a thread should pass. Between you, you could lay a tree trunk and it wouldn’t touch a soul! Pray for your son’s life, children. Pray hard. But remember, it’s all God’s will. Sometimes, God teaches the foolish this way. Otherwise you’d never learn. Love saves all.” Soaked through and through, Alex and Jenny knelt before the icon of St. Nicholas, sobbing out their prayers, making promises, vowing to end all their affairs. The next morning, the phone rang. Danny had come out of his coma. His parents rushed to his bedside. He tried to smile through his pain. “Mum, Dad, please don’t split up,” Danny whispered. “Why do you think we would, sweetheart? We’re together,” Jenny soothed, stroking his hot hand. Danny winced. “I saw it, Mum. And when I have children, I’ll name them after you.” Alex and Jenny exchanged glances, thinking Danny was talking nonsense — children? He couldn’t even lift a finger, barely clinging to life! But from that moment, Danny began to recover. All the family’s efforts went into saving him; the holiday home was sold. The garage and car, lost in the fire, could have helped too — but the only thing that mattered was that their boy survived. Grandparents chipped in however they could. The family rallied together in their shared grief. Even the longest day must end. A year passed. Danny was now at a rehabilitation centre, able to walk and look after himself. There, he met Mary, a girl his own age, also a burns survivor, her face terribly scarred. She was shy, never looking in mirrors. Danny was drawn to her gentle spirit and inner wisdom, wanting to protect her. They spent every free moment together. Both had known unimaginable pain and despair, learned to swallow bitter medicine, grow unafraid of needles and white coats. Time passed… Danny and Mary had a quiet wedding. Two beautiful children followed — a daughter, Charlotte, and, three years later, a son, Eugene. At last, the family seemed settled and at peace. Yet, at this point, Alex and Jenny decided to part ways. Everything with Danny had left them empty and weary. Both craved freedom and calm. Jenny moved in with her sister in the suburbs, but first stopped by the church for Father Simon’s blessing. She often thanked him for Danny’s life, but he always reminded her: “Thank God, Jenny!” He wasn’t pleased she was leaving, but said gently, “If you must, go and rest. Sometimes solitude is good for the soul. But come back! Husband and wife are one!” Alex remained alone in their empty flat. The sons, now with families of their own, lived separately. Even the former couple visited their grandchildren at different times, careful not to cross paths. In short, now everyone was comfortable…

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In this family, everyone lived their own life.

Tom, the father, had not only his wife, but also a favourite woman on the sideand sometimes not even the same one. Sarah, the mother, suspecting her husbands affairs, wasnt exactly upstanding herself. She liked spending time away from home with a married colleague. Their two sons were largely left to their own devices.

No one really took an interest in raising them. More often than not, they wandered aimlessly. Their mother insisted that the school should bear full responsibility for the boys upbringing.

The family only came together in the kitchen on Sundays, simply to eat a quick, silent lunch before scattering off to their separate pursuits.

Thats how the family would have gone on, wrapped up in their broken but strangely sweet livesuntil something irreversible tore through it all.

When the younger son, Dennis, was twelve, Tom took him along to his garage as a helper for the first time. While Dennis poked around with the tools, his father nipped off to see some car enthusiast friends nearby.

Suddenly, thick black smoke began pouring from Toms garage, soon followed by tongues of wild flame.

No one understood what had happened. (Later, it turned out that Dennis had accidentally knocked over a lit blowtorch onto a canister of petrol.) People froze in shock and confusion. The fire raged. Someone threw a bucket of water over Tom, and he lunged into the burning garage.

Everyone waited breathlessly. After only seconds, Tom staggered out from the inferno, carrying his lifeless son in his arms. Dennis was badly burned, with only his face unscathedhed likely protected it with his hands. All of his clothes had burned away.

Someone had already called the fire brigade and an ambulance. Dennis was rushed to hospital. By some miracle, he was alive.

Dennis was operated on immediately. After hours of anxious waiting, the surgeon came out to meet his parents, delivering the grim news in a measured tone:

Were doing everything possible, and beyond. Your son is in a coma. His chances are one in a million. Medicine cannot help him now. If Dennis can summon a remarkable will to live, perhaps there will be a miracle. Hold strong.

Without a second thought, Tom and Sarah rushed to the nearest church, as rain pounded down in torrents. Frantic with fear, they noticed nothing and no one; their entire world had shrunk to saving their son.

Drenched and desperate, Tom and Sarah entered the old stone church for the first time in their lives. It was quiet and sparsely filled. Spying the vicar, the couple approached hesitantly.

Vicar, our son is dying! Please, what can we do? Sarah sobbed.

My names Father George. Well now. When trouble comes, its straight to Godeh? he said, with somber candour. Is there much to confess?

Not really, no. We havent killed anyone, Tom muttered, dropping his gaze under the vicars piercing eyes.

But have you killed your love? Because its lying dead at your feet. There should be no wedge between husband and wife, but between you, a great log could fit and no one would notice! Ah, people

Pray, my children, for your sons healing to Saint Nicholas! Pray hard! But remember, Gods will covers all. Dont grumble against Him! Sometimes, He can only guide the foolish through hardshipotherwise, youd never understand. Watch that you dont ruin your souls without noticing. Change! Love has the power to save!

Tom and Sarah stood rain-soaked and tear-streaked before the clear-sighted Father George, as uneasy as two ugly ducklings hearing bitter truths. They looked utterly wretched.

Father George pointed to the icon of Saint Nicholas.

At the icon, Tom and Sarah fell to their knees. They wept, prayed fervently, and made heartfelt vows.

All extramarital affairs were ended for good. Forgotten entirely, written off as mistakes. Piece by piece, thread by thread, they examined their lives.

The very next morning, the doctor rang: Dennis had come out of the coma.

Tom and Sarah were already sitting at his bedside.

As Dennis opened his eyes and caught sight of his parents, he tried to smile. But pain had settled over his young face like a mask.

Mum, Dad, pleasedont split up, the boy whispered.

Whatever gave you that idea? Were here together, Sarah replied softly, gently stroking his feverish hand. Dennis winced in pain, and Sarah quickly withdrew.

I saw it, Mum. And when I have children, theyll be named after you both, Dennis continued quietly.

Tom and Sarah exchanged a look. They felt sure Dennis was ramblingchildren? He couldnt so much as move a finger; it was a miracle he was alive. The best anyone hoped for was a slow recovery.

Yet Dennis began to mend. All their time and money went into his recovery. Tom and Sarah sold their cottage.

It was a shame that the garage and car had burnt out entirely that fateful daythey could have sold those too for Denniss medical bills. But the main thing: their son was alive! The grandparents all pitched in, giving whatever they could.

The family drew close in the face of misfortune.

Every long day must end.

A year passed.

Dennis moved to a rehabilitation centre. He could walk now and manage much for himself.

There, Dennis befriended a girl called Alice, his own age. Like Dennis, Alice had also suffered burns in a fireher face was badly scarred.

After several surgeries, she was painfully shy about her appearance. She refused to look in mirrors, too ashamed and afraid.

Dennis felt deep warmth toward Alice. There was something luminous about her; she drew people in with her wisdom beyond her years and her gentle vulnerability. He wanted nothing more than to protect her.

They spent their hours together, sharing in the burdens and joys that only those who had known great suffering could understand: harrowing pain, despair, bitter pills, and the constant presence of syringes and white coats. They had favourite topics they never tired of discussing.

Time moved on

Dennis and Alice had a small, heartfelt wedding.

They went on to have two beautiful children: a daughter, Charlotte, and, three years later, a son, James.

And just when the family could finally breathe easily, Tom and Sarah made a decisionthey separated. The whole ordeal of Denniss accident had left them so drained that they could no longer live together. They were both emptied out, longing for peace and release from each other.

Sarah moved to the countryside to stay with her sister. Before leaving, she visited the church to ask for Father Georges blessing. Over the past years, she had often thanked him for helping save her son. But Father George would gently correct her:

Thank God, not me, Sarah.

He discouraged her from going.

If you truly must, go. A little solitude can be good for the soul. But come back, Sarah! Husband and wife are two halves of a whole, Father George said fatherly.

Tom stayed alone in the now-empty flat. The sons, now grown with their own families, had homes of their own.

Even as grandparents, Tom and Sarah only managed visits to their grandchildren one at a timecareful not to bump into each other.

In a sense, everyone finally found their own sense of comfort.

Life has a way of teaching us the value of love and togethernesssometimes through pain, sometimes through triumph. But in the end, its only when we open our hearts to love and forgiveness that we truly come home.

Let Me Remind You “Mrs. Mary Stevens, the curl just won’t go right here,” sighed little Year Two pupil Timmy, prodding at the stubborn, wayward green leaf on the flower he’d tried so hard to paint. “Try not to press so hard, sweetheart. Glide the brush as gently as if you’re stroking a feather across your hand. There you go — wonderful! That curl’s a true delight!” The elderly teacher smiled. “And who’s this masterpiece for, then?” “For Mum!” Timmy beamed, triumphant at last. “It’s her birthday today — this is my present!” Pride rang clearly in his voice after her praise. “Oh, your mum’s a lucky lady, Timmy. Be patient, though — don’t close your sketchbook yet. Let the paint dry, so you don’t smudge it. When you get home you can carefully tear it out. She’ll just love it, you’ll see!” Mrs. Stevens gave one last fond glance to the boy’s determined, lowered head, and, smiling at her thoughts, returned to her desk. A gift for Mum — she hadn’t seen such pretty gifts in years. Timmy clearly had talent for art. She ought to call his mum and suggest signing him up for art school, such gifts shouldn’t go untended. And she’d ask her former pupil, now a mother herself, whether she’d liked her son’s present. Mrs. Stevens herself could hardly tear her eyes away from those flowers blooming on paper — as if their living, rustling leaves might suddenly stir. Just like his mum, that Timmy! Definitely just like her… Larissa at his age drew beautifully too… ***** “Mrs. Stevens, it’s Larissa, Timmy Carter’s mum,” came a call that evening in the teacher’s flat. “I’m ringing to let you know Timmy won’t be in tomorrow,” the voice of a young woman declared curtly. “Hello, Larissa! Has something happened?” Mrs. Stevens asked gently. “It has! That rascal ruined my whole birthday!” snapped the reply. “And now he’s lying there with a temperature — ambulance left just now.” “What do you mean, Larissa? He left school perfectly well, with your present…” “You mean those blotches?” “Blotches? Oh no, Larissa! He painted you such beautiful flowers! I was going to ring you myself — to recommend art school—” “I don’t know about flowers — but I certainly didn’t expect a mangy little lump!” “A lump? What do you mean?” Mrs. Stevens was bewildered by the nervous, muddled explanation from the other end. Her frown deepened as she listened. “Tell you what, Larissa — mind if I come round for a bit? I live just nearby…” Moments later, having gained consent from her former pupil — now, in the blink of an eye, her pupil’s mum too — Mrs. Stevens took from her drawer a thick album of faded photos and precious childhood drawings from her first ever class, and set off. In the bright kitchen where Larissa welcomed her, chaos reigned. Tidying away the cake and piling dishes in the sink, Timmy’s mum began to tell her tale: How he arrived home late from school, dripping with muddy water from backpack and clothes; how he pulled a sopping puppy from under his coat, smelling of the rubbish tip — he’d gone in after it himself when bullies tossed it in a ditch. The ruined textbooks, the ‘blotched’ art book not fit to look at. And now the fever high as nearly 102… The guests had left before tasting any cake, and the paramedic had scolded her for not keeping better watch… “So I took him back, that puppy, to the very dump when Timmy had fallen asleep. The sketchbook’s drying on the radiator — as for flowers, there’s nothing left at all,” Larissa scoffed, not seeing how Mrs. Stevens’ face darkened with each word. And when she mentioned the pup’s fate — rescued, then returned to the dump — the teacher grew black as thunder. Stroking the damaged album gently, she spoke softly. Of green swirls and painted flowers, of diligence and courage, of a boy’s heart that couldn’t bear unfairness — and the bullies who tossed a helpless creature in a ditch. Then she stood, led Larissa to the window: “There’s the ditch — Timmy could’ve drowned, never mind the puppy. But do you think he paused to think? Or was he thinking instead about the painted flowers, not wanting to spoil his gift for you?” “Have you forgotten, Larissa, how you once sat weeping on the school bench, clutching a stray kitten you’d saved from the toughs? How we all stroked it and waited with you for your mum? How you dreaded going home when they threw that ‘mangy lump’ out — until, thank heavens, they let you keep him in the end? Let me remind you… Tishka the kitten, who you adored; and floppy-eared Max, the mutt who walked by your side all the way to college; even the jackdaw with the broken wing you nursed in our class menagerie…” From her yellowed album Mrs. Stevens drew a large photo: a slender little girl in a school pinafore, beaming as she cradled a fluffy kitten, surrounded by classmates. “I’ll remind you of the kindness that once blossomed in your own heart, as vibrant and colourful as any paint.” After the photo, a faded childhood drawing floated down — a little girl clutching a shaggy kitten in one hand, tightly holding her mother’s palm in the other. “If I had my way,” Mrs. Stevens spoke more sternly, “I’d kiss that puppy’s nose and Timmy’s too! And those ‘blotches’ I’d frame, for no mother ever received a finer gift than raising her child to be a true person.” Larissa’s face changed with every word. Anxious glances darted toward Timmy’s closed bedroom. Her white knuckles tightened on the ruined sketchbook. “Mrs. Stevens! Please, watch Timmy for just a few minutes — I’ll be right back. Please!” The teacher watched as Larissa hurriedly tossed on her coat and dashed out the door. Out into the night she ran, toward the distant rubbish tip, heedless of muddy shoes, calling and searching beneath dirty boxes, rooting through litter, her worried eyes ever flicking back toward home… Would Timmy forgive her? ***** “Timmy, who’s that burying his nose in the flowers — is that your friend Duke?” “That’s him, Mrs. Stevens! Does it look like him?” “It certainly does! See that white star on his paw — just like when your Mum and I were scrubbing out those muddy paws, remember?” “And now I wash his paws every day!” Timmy declared with pride. “Mum says if you have a friend, you should look after him. She even got us a special tub for his baths!” “Your mum’s wonderful,” smiled Mrs. Stevens. “Are you drawing her another present?” “Yep, I want to put this one in a frame. She’s got those blotches up in a frame, but still keeps smiling at them. Is it normal to smile at blotches, Mrs. Stevens?” “At blotches?” the teacher chuckled. “Well, maybe — if they were made with love. Now tell me, how’s art school going?” “Oh, I’m doing great! Soon I’ll be able to paint Mum’s portrait! She’ll really love that! But for now…” Timmy rummaged in his backpack and pulled out a folded sheet. “This is from Mum — she paints too.” Mrs. Stevens unfolded it and touched the boy’s shoulder gently. Across the page, a bright, happy Timmy smiled, his hand resting atop his beloved black-and-white mongrel, gazing up at him in adoration. Beside them stood a tiny, fair-haired schoolgirl in an old-fashioned uniform, cuddling a fluffy kitten; and, off to the side, peering from behind a desk piled with reading books, Mrs. Stevens herself — smiling kindly, ageless wisdom shining in those eyes. In every stroke of the painting, in every colourful mark, Mrs. Stevens felt that secret, boundless pride only a mother could feel. Wiping away a tear, she suddenly brightened, noticing a single word, spelled out in blossoms and curling green vines at the very corner: “Remember.”

I’ll Remind You — “Miss Mary, look, I just can’t get this curl right,” little Tom whispered sadly, poking his paintbrush at a stubborn green leaf on his flower painting that just wouldn’t curl the way he wanted. — “Don’t press so hard on your brush, darling… Like this—paint as if you’re tickling your palm with a feather. There! Well done! That’s not a curl, that’s a masterpiece!” smiled the elderly teacher. “And who’s the lucky person getting such a beautiful picture?” — “It’s for my mum!” Tom beamed, proud now that he’d conquered the stubborn leaf. “It’s her birthday today! This is my present!” His voice was tinged with a touch of pride at the teacher’s praise. — “Oh, your mum’s a lucky lady, Tom. Wait a minute—don’t close your sketchbook yet. Let the paint dry so it won’t smudge. When you get home, carefully tear the page out. Your mum will love it, you’ll see!” Miss Mary watched the small, dark head bent so intently over the drawing, then smiled to herself and returned to her desk. A present for mum! Mary couldn’t remember the last time she’d seen such a beautiful gift. Tom really did have a talent for art! She must call his mum and suggest signing him up for art classes—you can’t let a gift like this go to waste. It might be nice to ask her old pupil if she liked the present too. Mary herself couldn’t tear her eyes from those flourishing leaves and curling stems on the paper. It almost seemed as if they might rustle to life at any moment. Ah, he takes after his mother! Just like her. Larissa was a gifted little artist at his age too… ***** — “Miss Mary, this is Larissa, Tom’s mum,” came the evening call in the teacher’s flat, the young woman’s voice strict through the receiver, “Just phoning to say Tom won’t be in tomorrow.” — “Hello, Larissa! Is something wrong?” Miss Mary asked gently. — “Wrong? He ruined my whole birthday, that’s what! And now he’s lying in bed with a fever—the ambulance only just left!” — “A fever? But he left school perfectly well—and he was bringing you his present…” — “You mean those splodges?” — “What splodges, Larissa? He painted you flowers! I was just about to call you, to suggest art school for him…” — “I don’t know about flowers, but I certainly wasn’t expecting a scruffy heap!” — “A heap? What are you talking about?” Miss Mary was at a loss, frowning more deeply as she listened to Larissa’s agitated explanations. “Larissa, do you mind if I come over for a bit? I’m not far…” A few minutes later, with her former student’s consent—now, somehow, her pupil’s mum—Miss Mary was out the door, carrying an old album full of faded photos and remembered children’s drawings from her very first, long ago, beloved class. Larissa led her guest into a bright but chaotic kitchen. Clearing cake and dirty plates, she started to explain: How Tom arrived home late, caked in mud and water from his bag and clothes… How he pulled a drenched puppy from his jacket, reeking of rubbish, the poor creature thrown into a puddle by older boys—and how Tom had scrambled after him. How ruined textbooks and stained paintings were all that remained, the album on the radiator, nothing left of the flowers but a mess. How the guests left without tasting cake, and how the doctor had scolded her, a careless mother letting her child fall ill… — “So I took the puppy back to the dump once Tom fell asleep. The album’s still drying, but there’s nothing left. I can’t bear to look at it.” She didn’t notice how each word made Miss Mary grow sterner, nor how she darkened completely when Larissa recounted the puppy’s fate. Miss Mary stroked the ruined album and, quietly now, spoke— She talked of green curls and living flowers, of a child’s diligence and bravery beyond his years. Of a boy’s kind heart and about the bullies who’d thrown a helpless puppy into that puddle. Then she stood, took Larissa’s hand, and led her to the window: — “See there? That puddle? Tom could have drowned instead of the puppy. Do you really think he thought about that? Perhaps he was thinking of the flowers on his painting, hoping not to ruin his gift for you? Or have you forgotten, Larissa, how you once cried on a school bench in the old days, hugging a stray kitten you saved from bullies? How the whole class gathered, waiting for your mum? How you didn’t want to go home, blaming your parents when they tossed that ‘scruffy ball of fur’ out… Good thing you changed your mind in time! Well, let me remind you! And Tiddles, the one you couldn’t part with, and floppy-eared Max, that puppy, always by your side until university. Even the rook with a broken wing you nursed in our class pet corner…” From her yellowed album, Miss Mary took an old photograph—a slim girl in a white pinny, clutching a kitten and beaming at the crowd of classmates—and continued, voice gentle but firm: — “Let me remind you of the kindness that once blossomed in your heart in bright colours, against all odds…” An old drawing fluttered from the album onto the table—a little girl holding a scruffy kitten, her other hand clutching her mother’s. — “If it were up to me,” Miss Mary went on more sternly, “I’d shower that puppy and Tom both with kisses! I’d frame those colourful splodges! Because there’s no better present for a mother than raising a child who turns out a decent person!” The teacher didn’t notice Larissa growing paler, worrying glances thrown toward Tom’s bedroom, or the way her fingers clutched that ill-fated album… — “Miss Mary! Please, could you keep an eye on Tom for just a few minutes? I need to—please, I’ll be quick!” Under her teacher’s kind but watchful eyes, Larissa hurried into her coat and rushed out. Not caring about her soaked shoes, she ran back to the dump in the distance, calling and searching beneath cardboard boxes and through rubbish bags, anxious eyes straying again and again towards home… Would he forgive her? ***** — “Tom, who’s that with his nose buried in the flowers? Is that your friend—Digger?” — “That’s him, Miss Mary! Looks just like him, doesn’t he?” — “He does! And the white star on his paw—you painted it perfectly! I remember helping your mum scrub those paws, you know,” the teacher laughed kindly. — “I wash Digger’s paws every day now!” Tom said proudly. “Mum says, ‘If you have a friend, you take care of him!’ She even got us a special bath for him!” — “Your mum’s wonderful,” smiled Miss Mary. “Are you working on another present for her?” — “Yep! Going to put it in a frame. She’s still got those splodges on the wall, but now when she looks at them, she smiles. Can you smile at splodges, Miss Mary?” — “Splodges?” The teacher chuckled. “Maybe… if the splodges are made from the heart. Tell me, how are you getting on at art school? Is it going well?” — “Brilliantly! Soon I’ll be able to paint my mum’s portrait! She’ll love that! But for now—here.” Tom reached into his bag and handed her a folded piece of paper. “This is from my mum—she paints now, too.” Miss Mary unfolded the sheet, squeezing his shoulder gently. Smiling up from the page in a scatter of colourful paints was a beaming Tom, his hand resting on a black-and-white mongrel gazing at him adoringly. On the right stood a petite, fair-haired girl in an old-fashioned uniform, hugging a fluffy kitten… On the left, behind a desk laden with books, sat Miss Mary herself, smiling, her impossibly wise eyes watching over the happy children. In every brushstroke and dab of colour, Miss Mary felt the warmth of a mother’s pride. Tears sparkled, but she smiled as she noticed, in a quiet corner edged with flowers and curling green stems, a single word, lovingly written: “Remember.”